My poem...

[andmiles2go]

Here...this is something that I have written.





i have love for an unloving lover.___________



She is sitting, looking, sitting, searching.
She is half a world away.
somewhere in between china and yesterday.
ya, i’ve stood where She sits, and sat where She stands
but iveneverstood where she stands,-----
i’venever sat where she sits.

like planets in orbit longing for the sun-
forever circling,
circling-
never close. never far.
but further still in simple being.

She is
and i am
but WE are not

i have love for an unloving lover-

lonely together,



together alone.

[Paco103]

Can I borrow that? You just wrote my life story!

Anyway - very nice.

[andmiles2go]

sure. print it out, do whatever you like with it. just DONT use it without givin me credit.

thanks.

[Fried Squirrel]

Nice.

[HatePirate]

You're never alone with a good beer in your hands.

[Paco103]

A beer? Oh. . . my bad

[dernhelm_003]

Very beautiful.

Is all of the punctuation intentional?